On this near-november morning I see no birds soaring.
Just a nipping cold on my dripping nose
And as i huddle here i struggle dearly to remember my toes.
The sight might bring fright of frost bite to some but to me it numbs an old affliction and abets a new addiction.
Limbs become useless, and excuses move to the front of my brain and then drift again like the swell of a riff And then, I find peace...then my shivers cease. Against all warning, it's then my heart finds warming.
So when that cold comes find your fire...grab your blanket
But as for me and my dripping nose...we can take it.
And as i huddle here i struggle dearly to remember my toes.
The sight might bring fright of frost bite to some but to me it numbs an old affliction and abets a new addiction.
Limbs become useless, and excuses move to the front of my brain and then drift again like the swell of a riff And then, I find peace...then my shivers cease. Against all warning, it's then my heart finds warming.
So when that cold comes find your fire...grab your blanket
But as for me and my dripping nose...we can take it.
1 comment:
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